It was an ordinary day on the slopes of Hotham everyone was having a pleasant time. until the blizzard came, the slopes emptied it was a perfect time to go and find some where to stay and hide so the blizzard would pass and I would not get wet and cold. There was a sign that said “DO NOT GO IN OTHER WISE YOU WILL DIE” there was once silly man who went down there and died a few years a go. I suddenly heard the siren go off and I screamed in horror. I am at the top at the top of the slope with no one else. What am I supposed to do think?
I stood there dead still, when I tried to move and get away from the blizzard but it was no good my feet just got stuck in the snow now the snow was stang to hurt as the wind picked up and I was getting cold. I hopped onto my snowboard and snow boarded to the lodge I ran inside.
No one was there I room ran into my room there was no one there I panicked ad ran round the lodge calling their names there was no sign of anybody. So I called the police I told them my situation, they said they can’t help me because they can’t control the weather and then they hanged up on me. I thought I was going to die but then I heard someone’s footsteps so I ran towards the noise there was a guide he told me everything would be alright I was breathing heavily because I was surprised that he was here and I was safe . But it turns out that I was not safe at all he was a mass murder so I pushed him off the out into the blizzard. I ran back to my room to wait out the blizzard in the morning a helicopter picked me up brought m home
Aaron, what did you think about writing a chain story? Was it fun? What did/didn’t work? Would you like to do it again? Is it an effective way to write a narrative?
Miss Mahon